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I need opinions on how this is.

My name is John. This is my story about how i survived the revolution.

I ran through the woods with her and her big smile that made the sun look like a old light bulb.

We ran from tree to tree, our feet hitting the cool pale grass.  We stopped only to hear the sound of the breeze through the trees, and to catch our breaths. Her hair brown and gold that just gleamed as we ran, was the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.  The world seemed to be at a pause. That's when we saw the lake, the lake that end our lives. But that's not for right now.  Curiosity flashed across her smiling face. We stripped down to our underwear then dove in. We swam until we were pruned. When we were done we dozed off on the cool grass. I don’t know how long we slept but it must have been long because it was dark when we woke. We made some fishing poles out of vine we found on a rock. We ate what we caught with some fruit we found on a near by tree. It was one of the best meal I ever had.